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So thanks to "theThirdCartel" 's critiques, and after looking at it long enough myself, I've hopefully made it look a bit better.


My original concept was to create a image that best displayed thateveryone has a little hate, saddness inside them. Whatever it is, it's easier to just keep it in but as I know first hand how bottled up feelings can fester into something ugly, eventually it'll always come out.
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TwistedEnforcer Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't make a comment when your mouth is hanging open in awe.
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lorenzArts Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing work!!!!
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theThirdCartel Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
You put a lot of work into the figure's face and the claw, so the parts that are less polished become more obvious. A few glaring problems include the other hand, which looks like a lump. It might not need to be rendered in detail, but it still needs some structure. The hair seems pasted on; it should contour at least the sphere of the skull/face, if not the neck and shoulders. The abs look like a slab of rubber; they too could use some construction. The breasts seem high, but it's hard to tell for sure. Overall, this piece would really benefit from the careful use of reference, in order to bring your vision to life.

Hope you don't take this the wrong way, but you did request critique. :)
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crysiblu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep, I take no offence because it's comments like yours that help me see my mistakes, so thank you:)
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theThirdCartel Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
You have a great attitude that will help you improve; best of luck. 8-)
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yoyonah Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh.... This is good. Very beautiful, love the lighting, the idea in general, just great.
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crysiblu Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks hun:D
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yoyonah Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome.
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